How do you like my poem Ode To My Dog Mandi, though its not complete?

I love your loving look within those big eyes

And your warm kisses are sincere

The way you squeak you toy in triumph

When you win a tug of war

That wet black button nose

And that wagging tail of yours

I love it when you greet me

And the twinkle of your toes

The little bell that rings whenever you come near

Is a sound I most enjoy to hear

To see those beautiful brown eyes

And those cream colored ears

How do you like my poem Ode To My Dog Mandi, though its not complete?adware remover

I think it's a wonderful poem! And I have seen dogs' toes twinkle too :) One of the meanings of twinkle is "move about gracefully'. Your poem gives a pleasing impression of your dog Mandi - her appearance and personality and your relationship with her. I especially like the unexpected way it ends 'And those cream colored ears' - even though you say it's not complete yet!

How do you like my poem Ode To My Dog Mandi, though its not complete?antivirus protection

Nathan, I think we're of one mind...My first thought when reading this poem is....."Dogs toes don't twinkle!"

I am a dog person...I have 4. A Greyhound, which I rescued...A Rat Terrier, which I rescued..A Border Collie, which I adopted, and a God only knows what, could be part Weiner Dog, Beautiful Girl that I found in the woods starving, about 4 weeks old, flea/tick ridden and on her last leg. I know everthing there is to know about dogs...I can sympathize with ya, no doubt.....But I feel like the flow of your poem is all over the place.....The first verse is great...after that you fall apart....Read what you wrote (your first verse) and compare it with the rest of the poem...Not nearly as good????? Yeah?