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I am in the Army National Guard, and I wrote this during the last month of boot camp. It's called ''Killer's Eyes''

They train me to bear my weapon with pride

They coax me to burn with eternal fire

They strive to make me like them inside

They want to give me killer鈥檚 eyes

Blood and triumph are my goals

Lead and iron, my allies

Bullets spraying, bombs detonating

They鈥檙e giving me these killer鈥檚 eyes

Is this who I am, who I鈥檓 meant to be?

Do I crave this insanity?

Does some inner darkness plead to be fed

On the screams and decay of the dying and dead?

Why all this conflict, this frank hesitation?

Could something be wrong with my situation?

I fight for my country, this sweet land of mine

So why all this discord inside my mind?

These questions are answered in one, simple line:

I don鈥檛 think I鈥檓 meant to have these killer鈥檚 eyes!

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when i get up

i dont know if im truly awake

or if im still dreaming

its son easy for me to die

in love with a woman

born in my heart

in my head, in my soul.

i wish it wouldnt be

so complicated to forgive

so i could live inside

all tears form my dreams

forget about the darkness

inside yourself, for what you

cannot get theres no one

else to bleme

you are not the only one

everybody needs some body

and i want somebody

i want somebody to love

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wow. amazing. thats so inspirational. wow. you keep on writing girl!

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